By Londinium Media.
Written by Warren A. Lyon.
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This is a bold, subversion-heavy take on the Jesse Owens biopic. You’re weaving a complex narrative that contrasts the international adulation Owens received with the visceral, systemic gatekeeping of the American Jim Crow era.
Here is a conceptual breakdown of your story beats, structured to highlight the heavy irony and social commentary you’ve described.
1. The Global Icon: The Tour
The film opens with a high-energy montage of Jesse Owens traveling through London, Berlin, and Milan.
* The Contrast: While Owens is forced to use freight elevators in American hotels, in Europe, he is the "Man of the Hour."
* The Locals: We see scenes of Italian and German locals swarming him, not with hostility, but with awe, begging for photos and autographs.
* The Glamour: A surreal, dreamlike sequence where Jesse shares a dance with Lena Horne or Dorothy Dandridge—symbols of Black excellence and beauty—highlighting a world of sophistication that feels lightyears away from the dirt tracks of Alabama.
2. The Private Dialogue: Owens and Hitler
This is the film’s centerpiece—a quiet, tense, 30-minute conversation in a secluded room at the Olympic Stadium.
* The Topic: Hitler doesn't just discuss athletics; he asks about the American South.
* The Mirror: Hitler probes Jesse about the "American Paradox." He questions why America critiques German policy while practicing state-sanctioned violence at home.
* Jesse’s Reality: Jesse has to navigate the conversation carefully, acknowledging the "double consciousness" of being a hero for a country that treats him as a second-class citizen.
3. The Tragedy of the Tuskegee Graduate
The film shifts to a brutal, grounded subplot about the "Competitive Black Professional."
* The Menace of Success: We follow a Tuskegee-educated man—articulate, wealthy, and self-assured.
* The Incident: He is "dead walking" to his car. In a twisted turn of logic, the local White Pastor acts as judge and jury.
* The Lynching: The Pastor justifies the murder by claiming the graduate is a "menace to society" for daring to compete for social authority or inheritance. It portrays lynching not just as random hate, but as a calculated tool to eliminate economic and social competition.
4. The North and the "Jelly Bean" Bureaucracy
We see the "Northern" brand of racism—less violent but equally dehumanizing.
* The Sears Roebuck Account: Jesse or his associates encounter shadowy figures who assume Black illiteracy.
* The Jelly Bean Test: A metaphor for the impossible hurdles of the era. To simply open a credit account or order from a catalog, they are told to "count the jelly beans in the jar" or perform some other absurd task of "qualification."
5. The Texas Retirement
The film ends with a quiet dignity. Jesse Owens, the man who outran the world, settles in Texas.
* The Role: He becomes a track coach, passing his knowledge to the next generation.
* The Legacy: The final shot isn't of his gold medals, but of him on a dusty Texas field, blowing a whistle as young runners sprint toward a future he helped pave—even if he couldn't enjoy the full fruits of it himself.
This is a very specific, evocative vision. Would you like me to write the dialogue for that 30-minute scene between Jesse and Hitler, or perhaps develop the script for the Sears Roebuck "jelly bean" scene?
This adds a surreal, high-stakes layer of historical revisionism to the script. The revelation of Hitler’s "secret" heritage transforms the scene from a political debate into a bizarre, transactional confidence game.
Here is how those specific dialogue beats and the aftermath would play out in your screenplay:
Scene: The Secret Chambers of the Reichskanzlei
The Setting: Dimly lit, smelling of expensive tobacco and old parchment. Hitler leans back, dropping the orator's persona for something more cynical and worldly.
The Identity Reveal
Hitler leans in close to Owens. He doesn't look like the man on the posters. He whispers that his "Aryan" purity is a front—a brand for the masses.
* The Claim: He suggests he is either Turkish or a White Nigerian (descended from the colonial elite).
* The Motivation: "Why confirm which one?" he sneers. "I have the benefits. I have the gold. Identity is a garment you wear to get paid."
The "Benefit" Exchange
The conversation pivots to social structures.
* Hitler’s Inquiry: He asks Jesse about the "benefit" (social standing/support) in Massachusetts.
* Jesse’s Response: Jesse reflects on his youth. He confirms that in the quintessential Irish and English culture of the Northeast, his "benefit"—his place in the social contract—was established by the time he was ten years old. It was a structured, predictable world.
* The Friction: Hitler presses him on Missouri and Indiana. The silence that follows is heavy. These are the "Jelly Bean" states—places where the rules change on a whim to ensure the Black man never collects his due.
The Pitch: The People’s Car
Hitler stands and gestures to a blueprint on the desk: The Volkswagen.
* The Goal: "Help me sell these when you return to the States," Hitler says. It’s a move to bypass the blockade of American industry.
* The Non-Answer: Neither man acknowledges the moral weight of the request. The tension is broken by a sudden aide entering the room: War has been announced.
The Return: The Ten Volkswagens
The film cuts from the grayscale tension of Berlin to the vibrant, chaotic docks of New York.
* The Cargo: As the world prepares for conflict, Jesse Owens oversees the unloading of a strange sight: 10 pristine Volkswagens.
* The Statement: While the "Northern" bureaucrats try to make him count jelly beans for a Sears account, Owens is driving the future of German engineering through the streets of America.
* The Irony: He is a man who was snubbed by FDR, yet he returns as a silent partner in a global automotive shift, fueled by a secret conversation with a man who claimed to be a "White Nigerian."
Comparison of Global Contexts
|
Location |
Social "Benefit" Experience |
Jesse's Status |
|---|---|---|
|
Massachusetts |
Established by age 10; structured Irish/English influence. |
Integrated Athlete |
|
Missouri/Indiana |
The "Jelly Bean" bureaucracy; inconsistent and gatekept. |
Second-class Citizen |
|
Berlin/London |
High-prestige, transactional, and adoring. |
International Icon |
What’s Next for the Script?
This flashback provides the perfect emotional anchor for Jesse’s character. It establishes the "quintessential Irish and English culture" he referenced to Hitler—a world where the rules were firm, but he knew where he stood from the age of ten.
Integrating this into the script adds a layer of "Northern" nostalgia that contrasts sharply with the "Jelly Bean" bureaucracy of the Midwest and the violence of the Deep South.
🎞️ Script Segment: The Boston Flashback
EXT. BOSTON BACK BAY - WINTER - DAY (FLASHBACK)
The air is crisp, visibility white with falling snow. A young JESSE (12) wears a thick wool cap and a worn-out coat. He isn’t running; he’s gliding.
The Neighborhood Bond
Jesse is surrounded by a boisterous group of neighborhood kids—some Black, many Irish and English. There is no "jelly bean" counting here. They are a pack. They speak in fast, clipped Boston accents, arguing about scores and professional legends.
The Hockey Try-Out
They reach a frozen pond where a local youth scout stands with a clipboard. This is the "benefit" Jesse mentioned—the structured opportunity of the North.
* The Action: Jesse isn't just fast on his feet; he’s lethal on skates. We see him cut through the ice, the sound of blades carving a sharp shhh-shhh against the frozen surface.
* The Interaction: He checks a white teammate into the boards. The teammate shoves him back, grinning. It’s a meritocracy of grit.
* The Realization: Jesse looks at the scout. For a moment, he isn't a "Black athlete"—he is just a Boston athlete. He has his "benefit." He belongs to the city's sporting fabric before the world ever tries to tell him otherwise.
🎬 Scene: Back to Berlin (The Transition)
INT. OLYMPIC STADIUM - PRIVATE QUARTERS - CONTINUOUS
The sound of the ice skates fades into the ticking of a heavy grandfather clock in Hitler’s office.
HITLER
(Leaning forward, eyes narrowing)
"So, the Irish and the English... they gave you a foundation. A contract in the old 1500's Commonwealth. You knew the price of entry in Massachusetts. But Missouri? Indiana? They want you to count the beans in the jar before they let you buy a coat from a catalog."
JESSE
(Steadfast)
"In Boston, I knew the ice. In Indiana... the ground is always shifting under your feet. You never know if you're standing on law or a man's whim."
HITLER
(A cynical chuckle)
"Exactly. Which is why I prefer my way. I am a White Nigerian—or perhaps Turkish. It doesn't matter. I chose my identity because it paid the best. Now... about these Volkswagens. You take ten. You show them that the German 'People’s Car' doesn't care about the color of the driver, only the strength of the engine."
The Visual Narrative Balance
|
The Boston Flashback |
The Berlin Conversation |
The Return to America |
|---|---|---|
|
Colors: Cool blues, whites, and grey wool. |
Colors: Deep reds, shadows, and gold trim. |
Colors: Sepia tones, dusty roads, black steel. |
|
Theme: Earned belonging and "The Benefit." |
Theme: Transactional identity and global power. |
Moving Forward with the Story
This creates a powerful arc: Jesse goes from the snowy meritocracy of Boston to the high-stakes surrealism of Berlin, finally returning to the "Jelly Bean" states not as a victim, but as a businessman with a fleet of foreign cars.
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